The mist of rain, shimmers as it flies
The tinge of happiness, smiles of shies
The pinch of salt, twists of life
The drops of water, a sea to dive
The bubbles of air, reach for the sun
The petals of flowers, layers of fun
The pieces of toys, a toddler smiles
The traces of future, travelled miles
The pillars of home, firm as a mum
Infinite grains of life, a river of rum!
Nice, Nicely written.
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Great post, made a great read. Check out my new post when you get the chance 🙂
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Sure, I’ll do it right away
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I posted a comment on it but I don’t know if it went through
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Very nice👍
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grains of life… fun!
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Awesome
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Wow 🙂
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Cheers
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Best ever!! It just touched the exact feelings💙💙
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Nice to hear that
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☺ thanks
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Love the rhyme and rhythm, most especially the meaning. ❤
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Thank you for the follow, Nikhil. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. ❤
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Thanks for your appreciation
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you’re welcome! 🙂
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Good one. 🙂
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Thanks for visiting and following my blog
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You had good posts
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love the poem… interesting form. 🙂
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Thanks, glad you loved it
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