A train, two strangers
A blank seat, one obliges
Chats, laughs and fun
A friendship blossoms.
Night-outs, movies slip into dates
Blank hearts fill with romance
Reluctant religion, too much fission
Families fight, such a medieval version.
Hearts infallible, faith inflexible
Faraway they elope, blanks at home
New life, new place, same new love
Hand in hand, struggle for a sky above.
Isolation, calls, old thoughts melt
Time heals, homes a blank no more
Covers of crescendo, a life is born
A stranger, so familiar – fills the blank.
oh Wow…how beautifully described…
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Means a lot!
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the lack of acceptance for love in the society.. how painful
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It is especially when we can’t do anything about it.
I was heading to a sad ending but then I changed.
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yeah, a mix of hope and new life towards the end is a great idea…. fantastic
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Glad you liked it
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An absolutely beautiful poem …yep …love is love ….unfortunately ‘religion’ tends to loose that somewhat amongst the ‘doctrine’ …or at least it’s ‘implementation’ usually:)
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Thanks for your kind words!
We tend to lose sight of our broad universality in narrow pursuit of religion.
Read this on religion – https://weirdlywiredus.wordpress.com/2016/05/19/religion-a-blind-caterer-bloggers-marathon-2/
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Nikhil you are a true 21st century boy:):):):) ……to actually SEE a picture of ‘love’ just have a look at my last post ….they’re probably about your age too:)
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Will do!βΊ
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I really like this piece. Love can conquer all but it depends on the person.
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Yes.. indeed!
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Excellent in every way! G-uno
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Thanks for your appreciation
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Love does conquer all. Beautifully done! π
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Glad to hear from you.
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Hey! I nominated you to the Three Day Quote challenge here:
https://specsclad.wordpress.com/2016/05/31/three-day-quote-challenge-day-1/
Hope you try it π
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Nikhil .. Ur poem is really good ..love it. Looking forward to see n read more from you ..cheers.ππ
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Thank you. And likewise.
CheersπΉπΉ
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Beautiful poem.
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Cheers to love! πΈπΈ
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